OSTHEER IS DONE WHEN IT'S DONE!
nah, ending is very good, sounds like neverending battle in muddy trenches
Having the song continue like normal, and just fade out, is perhaps the laziest way to end a song.... but it's certainly the worst with lyrics. How the fuck are they supposed to replicate that at a concert?!
Fade the volume. Add a little reverb and drop the lights.