[Finished] Perekop (6)

[Elquattro]

Hi  !

Last day, i made a map for Eastern Front, and i propose this map.
If you can test my map ? Thanks =)

Name : Perekop (6)
Date : November 1941
Player : 6
Story : During the invasion of the axis. Perekop was made quickly, but II-2 bombed relentlessly the bridges between the two sides.
The city of Sevastopol is next on the axis list...
Perekop : v1.00

I made a website for downloading this map, and for all information on the progress of the map.

Link -> Perekop

Loading Map :


Map Strat :


Preview Map :


Screenshot Map :

[pariah]

That looks so cool!

[Elquattro]

Thx Pariah =D

[cephalos]

Actually, map looks good, but it's too empty and clean. Bridges and area around them isn't crowded by rubbish and other stuff. It just lack of small details. Everything else is very good IMO.

[Walentin 'Walki' L.]

The map has a good layout but It needs more detail I think.

[Desert_Fox]

Looks nice!

Little advice/comment:

Isn't better if that one of the Start Point should be in the other island?

ex:

1 Alone 2-3 couple
6 Alone 4-5 couple

Where 1-6 fight each other 1v1 and 2/3 -4/5 fight 2v2, like in Montherme map...but is only my opinion.

Anyway good work.

[pariah]

It could be interesting if you just moved 1 and 6 over to the neighboring islands... (Or maybe just 3 and 4, so the other start positions are closer to the middle.)

[Max 'DonXavi' von B.]

Honestly, you need more details.
Just doing some tile, spline and object work doesn't make a good map. Try to make it less boring using splats (I know, shit of work) and grass.

What I like is the layout. And the idea of moving positions 1 and 6 to the empty island is good, even for gameplay.

Try to apply these hints and your map will get much better 

[pariah]

I really can't see how you can judge detail on these few screenshots...

[Blackbishop]

I really can't see how you can judge detail on these few screenshots...

There's a download link there.

[pariah]

Yeah, i downloaded it, moved it to where the maps are, but it's not in the list...

[Max 'DonXavi' von B.]

@blacky: I didn't download it at all, maybe I'll do later, but right now I'm busy for school.

@pariah: look at the 3rd pic from the bottom. I looks a bit.. boring. Just this green, flat grass tile, some trees and houses. I wasn't meant insulting, just as a hint for him to improve his work. I didn't say this because I just like to complain, I am a mapper myself and this was meant constructive and not destructive

Edit: Just seen on 3rd pic, ElQuattro, you forgot the little off-map space that surrounds the playable area. Not bad for gameplay, I would just ignore it, but looks strange when you are playing and there is just nothing, a black screen.

Nice theatre anyway. I like the Sevastopol campaign.

[pariah]

Yes, i realize you weren't trying to offend. And i, likewise, wasn't trying to offend. I just think it's hard to get a good idea of the details from a few pics is all.

Also, i didn't notice until you mentioned it, but yeah that black border does look weird... Maybe the Earth is flat after all?

[Blackbishop]

@MaxiKing6
Me too, but i'm at work . So, I suppose it works xD.

[Elquattro]

Very Thx for All comment !

I will change and add :
1- More details
2- positions 1 and 6 to the empty island

3- Correct -> Black Screen